wretched little rascals!
jumped right above my head
what a bloody noise they made
i thought i'd just fall dead!
music floating through my ears
making me wish i couldnt hear
the nuisanse that they turned out to be
i wish that i had earliar seen
hell broke loose at 9 each night
and i went up and made a fight
but then at last i did realise
that i had led a childish life
so down the steps i jumped and came
and knew that i still felt the same
the joy that had once engulfed my heart
i knew i was making a new start
i then came down and knelt to pray
to God-what did i want to say??
but it wasnt me..it was him saying
love thy neighbour like u love me!
1 comment:
the rhyming scheme could have been a tad better... but all in all this poem is good to be given a thumbs up...
well we all face this situation in our life i guess... i mean we might find someone else seeming a little too childish... but it is just that there is a child within ourselves that wants to break free from the monotonicity of life, but yet are bound by invisible shackles of responsibilities... i think there is an inner meaning in the last sentence when the poetess mentions God asking us to love others like we love him... i think that was a stroke of genius... keep it up...
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